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For everyone to 'walk with everyone else' it means that wealthier people would have to give up some of they're money so the poorer people would have more. In general people do not want  to give up their money. However, if you come up with a great idea and make millions, then you will get a chance. But with fame and fortune, comes sacrifice. People who come over from other countries or send their kids to places so they can have a better life. However, it means that they might never see their family again.

Willa
9/13/2013 06:12:56 am

I like it! especially the "But with fame and fortune, comes sacrifice" very deep :) only one thing, the second last sentence might be a fragment.

Great job!!

-willa

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Alison
9/13/2013 06:16:30 am

It was a really good inference. I like your ideas, you just messed up the spelling of they in the last sentence but that was probably because you were typing really fast. well done :)

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